Chapter 4 – Awakening

Sorry guys. It’s been a busy week. Here’s Chapter 4.


“Ahhh!!!” The girl cried out. Faint traces of magic began emerging around her.

Kaidus quickly grasped what was happening. Swiftly moving to her side, he grabbed her shoulders and turned her upward to face him. Although surprised at the sudden development, “You need to focus, Naleen! Calm your mind!” He bellowed, trying to get through to her.

She looked at him with confusion before groaning in pain once more. “Naleen! Listen to–!” He attempted once again, but the girl’s body went limp and flames erupted around them.
“Kuh-!” ‘How troublesome’ He grimaced, retreating as an inferno flared up around the girl. It whirled about, protecting her.

He didn’t know why, but she had awoken. The sudden burst of magic protecting its owner was evidence enough. Although mages rarely lose conscious during the process, all awakenings were different depending on circumstances.
He couldn’t help but stare, wondering if he needed to do something or stand back and watch.

Sensing movements behind him, he turned around to see that a man and woman—both wearing uniforms of the Mystiks guild—had jumped onto the stage.

“Move away, boy!” The man shouted.

Kaidus hastily retreated backwards, thankful at their arrival.

“… –vasu enarus! Ruziierus!” The woman invoked, bringing her arms up. A torrent of water surged forth from her arms, moving like a serpent, wrapping itself around the inferno spire. *TTSSSAAAA* a screen of steam quickly covered the stage, impeding their visions. “Sylas!” The woman shouted through the mist.

“…-nua! Azure Gale!!” The man invoked, and a powerful gust descended. Blowing away the steam, it revealed a water cyclone where the fire had been.

The water slowly stopped its rotation and slithered back to the woman who conjured it. “Well done.” The woman spoke, touching it. The serpentine form vanished, and the water splashed down onto the stage.

As quickly as it happened, the fire was gone and everything was calm again.
Within a charred circle on the stage, a young lady was lying unconscious on the ground. Sleeping peacefully as if nothing had happened. Parts of her leather armor and clothing were singed, but there were no burns or damages to the girl.

“Are you alright?” The man asked, arriving at his position with a few quick strides.

“I am, thank you.” Kaidus answered.

“Good.” With a single word, the man walked passed him, moving to check on the girl.

“We’ll take care of it from here. Please go and rest for your next match.” The woman who conjured the water serpent reassured him before moving to join her companion.

“Uh… Contestant Naleen is no longer able to continue. Young Kaidus advances to the final eight!” The announcer shouted awkwardly from the judge’s area.
The audience that had gone quiet over the display of magic went into an uproar.

As he walked towards the edge of the stage, a woman ascended the stairs and ran past him. Following her was an imposing man who was giving off a very peculiar aura.
“Naleen! My daughter, is she…”

“Congratulations on your victory, Kaidus.” The man commended, stopping before him.

“Thank you, my lord.” He made a respectful bow towards to the older man. It was not lord Gelrin the Royal Knight Commander, but his son Huin.

“Your previous matches were quite spectacular. Seeing this one, I want to apologize for Naleen’s lack of skills.”

“Not at all. She was a great opponent.”

“She will be stronger now, thanks to you.” A smile appeared on the lord’s stoic face.

Kaidus smiled. “I’m looking forward to the next time we cross swords again.”

The lord’s grin widened. “I will let her know. Good luck on your upcoming matches.”

“Thank you.”

“Until next time then.” The lord nodded before walking away to join his wife and daughter.

Without looking back, Kaidus walked off the stage.


Anise was pulling him through the crowd.
Many were talking about what they just saw, but others cheered for him as he and his sister made their way through.

Having already explained what happened on stage to Troyle, he was currently going to the food stalls with his little sister to get a snack.

People surrounded them as they moved towards the back of the audience.
“It’s him!”
“Kid! You better keep winning!” Someone yelled.
“How old are you?”
“Can you teach me how to fight?” A young boy questioned.

“STOP IT! Stop bothering my brother!” Anise clung onto him, repelling anyone who got too close with her free hand.

“It’s alright, Anise. Just keep walking.” He patted her head, keeping her moving.

After they broke through the spectators, Kaidus took a moment to look at his sister. “It’s been a long day. You’re not tired?”

“Nope.” She grinned, clinging onto his arm and pulling him towards the food stands.

“Well then, what do you want to eat this time?”

“I want qorkos wings again.” She happily answered.

Beyond stage two’s audience, onlookers paid little attention to them, allowing them to reach the food stalls easily.

“Three wings please!” Anise told the cook as their turn arrived.

“That’ll be three and six, little lady.”

“Here.” Kaidus handed two double bits to the man.

“No Kai! I’m paying!” Anise exclaimed, pulling his arm away. Reaching into a concealed pocket on her dress, she pulled out a little pouch. “Two. Four.” She counted before handing the four erns to the man.

“Thank you, and one is your return.” The man gave them a smile, handing back a metallic kui bit before giving them their wings.

Seared on an open flame then cooked in a mixture of thick sweet sauce, the wings were delectable. Anise joyfully nibbled hers, blissfully chewing through bones that had softened to a gelatinous texture as they walked back. Kaidus enjoyed his own while holding onto the extra for Troyle.

The return was less hectic, as many people were engrossed in the current match on stage. Forcing their way through the crowd, they joined Troyle at the front.

“Anise got one for you dad.” He handed the wing to Troyle.

“What about you two?”

“We ate ours on the way back.”

“I see. Thanks, baby.” Troyle smiled.
On stage, two female contestants were fighting it out. Both looked exhausted, but were fighting with all they’ve got.

“And Marin takes the win! She’ll be advancing to the final eight!” the announcer shouted after one of the woman manage to unbalance the other, pinning her down to the ground at sword point.

Workers quickly climbed up onto the stage to clean and prepare it for the next match.

Shortly after, the announcer moved from the judge’s area and got onto the stage, declaring the beginning of the final phase for the competition.

In the final phase, the area of stages three, four, and five are remodeled by mages of the Mystiks guild into a final arena. During that time, stages one and two hosts the final eight—four contestants to each stage—until the last two, who will then ascend the grand arena to have a final match in front of everyone for the title of champion.

The audience began shuffling as more and more people congregated around stage two.

With the audience settled, the announcer once again got on the stage. “Thank you all for waiting! Without further ado, the matches to determine the finalist from stage two will commence!”
The crowd thundered with applause and cheers.
“First one up is the young man who rose through the competition with his amazing speed and skills! Kaidus!”

“I’ll be right back.” He stepped forward, making his way towards the stairs once again.

“Win! Kai!” Anise shouted from behind.

“From stage three, a dashing young man who recently attained knighthood. With a lifetime of training and discipline, he represents the Knights! Vion!”

A handsome young man wearing dark leather armor climbed up from the opposite end of the stage, walking towards the middle. There was a red sword painted on his chest, and he held a long but slim one-handed sword.

Stopping a couple paces away, the man just looked at him. “Good evening. Let us have a good match.” Kaidus made a courteous bow.

“Hmph.” Vion gave him a look of disdain and fell into a stance.

Very well…’ Kaidus thought, taking a stance of his own.
The last time they saw each other was over five years ago. Considering Vion was now a knight, he had expected the man to have grown more respectable.
Unfortunately, that was not the case.


As repulsive as ever, the commoner was trying to act beyond his station.

He’s hated the boy ever since their first meeting.
He was sick and tired of hearing about the boy all those years ago, and felt insulted being compared to the lowly rabble by his father and grandfather.
Not only did his grandfather bathe the commoner with privileges. for the head of the esteemed Ravon house to have bowed so low to a commoner, it was disgraceful.

With the boy standing in front of him, all he could think about was teaching the bastard a lesson. Showing him where he stands. With magic being prohibited, this was his chance.

Having taken an aggressive stance: holding his sword in an overhead draw, draping it over his back. Legs ready to spring into action, and his left hand prepared to intercept or retaliate.
He waited patiently for the signal.


Vion quickly dashed forward.
With his long sword, he swiped out in a horizontal arc, not allowing the boy to advance.

*CLACK!” the sound of impact.
His sword was caught in between the boy’s two swords.

He attempted to pull his sword back, but the boy pushed it forward and upward, before dashing straight at him.
Holding his sword awkwardly with his elbow cocked back and the sword in the air, he couldn’t attack. Instead, he twisted his body and kicked with his left foot.

“GUH!” Instead of landing his kick, his leg was throbbing with pain.
Following the spin, he quickly lashed out again with his sword at where the boy was, only to cut air.

The boy appeared beside him and slammed two swords into his chest, knocking him back.

“You! You’re using magic!” He hollered. It was impossible for the little bastard to be moving that fast.

“You can’t even detect my presence when I’m right in front of you. Magic would be wasted on you.” The boy spoke, calmly staring at him.

“Arrogant little shit!” He spoke loud enough so that the boy could hear before lunging at the boy again. Pain blazed through his right side, and he couldn’t help but fall down. ‘What the fuck is going on?!’ His mind shouted, unable to grasp what was happening. There was no other explanation than magic, yet the judges were not saying anything. He stood up again, pointing his sword towards the commoner.

The boy suddenly vanished, and sharp pains dropped him to his knees.

Kneeling, the boy walked in front of him. With a last desperate attempt, Vion slashed out once again. Before he could finish the swing, a pressure assaulted his chest and pushed him onto the ground.

The boy stood above him, pinning him down with a sword to his chest and stepping on his sword hand.

Surely enough, the announcer called out the victor.


“!” Naleen sat straight up, breathing heavily.

Looking around, she was sitting on a fluffy bed. There was a box of training swords on one corner of the room, while two large dressers and a wardrobe adorned one of the walls. In the center of the room were two chairs and a table. ‘My room?’ she realized.
Taking a gander at her window, the light outside suggested it was still daytime.

The last thing she could remember was her frustration and an overbearing feeling before the pain knocked her out. Right before that, she remembered Kaidus shouting something at her. ‘What happened?’ She questioned herself.
She was obviously home, and it was still day, but she couldn’t tell what time of the day. It was almost evening when her fight against Kaidus started, so the competition must have ended.

Her arms and legs felt weird, and there was a different sensation in her body. It was an odd feeling, mixed in with all the pain and fatigue she had accumulated throughout the tournament.
Getting off the bed, she realized she was wearing a nightgown.
Her legs gave way as soon as she stepped onto the ground, and she fell onto the floor.

“Naleen!” A voice shouted from the doorway.

Looking up, “Mom?”

“How are you feeling? Are you hurting anywhere?” her mother ran over to her, embracing her.

“I feel fine. Just a little weak. What happened to me?”

“Thank goodness!” her mother tightened the embrace.

“Mom. What happened to me?” she asked again.

“It’s alright, honey. You’ve just awoken your magic.” Her mother replied, face brimming with happiness.

“My…” She was speechless. Her hands started shaking at what she just heard, and a sense of triumph pervaded through her body. She was afraid she would remain magic-less like her brother. Elated but scared at the same time, “H-how long have I been asleep?” She managed to ask, trying to divert her mind from the exciting news lest she started shouting with joy.

“Just overnight. Your awakening was quite the exhibition of magic.” Her mother replied, helping her up off the floor. “Let’s get you back on your bed. You need to rest.”

“The competition. What happened to the competition?” Naleen questioned, trying not to think about magic as she crawled back into bed.

“What do you think happened?” her mother grinned.

“Mom, just tell me.”

“The young boy from the 3rd ward won.”

“I knew it!” She exclaimed, feeling better about her loss.

“Is that admiration I hear in your voice?” Her mother interrogated with a sly grin.

“No! I mean, maybe a little. It just means that there’s nothing to be ashamed of in losing to him.” She quickly replied, remembering how dominant the boy was during their fight.
‘What am I saying?’ Naleen quickly thought to herself. She had completely forgotten about his little act of mercy and about her anger.
“What about Vion? How far did he get?” she asked, trying move away from thoughts about her pitiful state during the match.

“Vion also lost to him. They were matched up against each other in the final stage of the competition.”

A grin surfaced on her face, hearing that her brother lost to the same person. Before she can inquire about the final match, “bRrRrR” Her stomach growled. Her smile instantly turned into one of embarrassment.

“Hehe. Looks like my little girl is hungry. I’ll go tell Arlin to heat up something for you.”

“Thanks mom…” She gave an embarrassed reply.

“Go ahead and get some rest. I’ll bring it to you when it’s ready.” Her mother urged before leaving her room.

Laying on the bed, her mind was racing. She was imagining all the exciting things she’ll be able to do with magic, and could barely contain herself from screaming.

While she was having a light meal before supper, two girls came into her room.
“Naleen, are you alright?” Sylvia questioned before they even reached her bedside.

“My body aches all over, but other than that, I’ll live.” She replied with a smile. “What are you two doing here?”

“We heard you woke up, and came check on you. How’re you feeling?” Jillian enquired, pulling over one of the chairs in the room.

“Hmm… feeling better than I was earlier today.” She gave a wry smile.

“How does it feel to be a mage?” Jillian quickly got to the point, grinning at her.

“Honestly, I don’t really feel any different. I still have to ask dad and grandpa about it, but I’ve been in here all day and they’ve been too busy to visit me.”


“Can you guys tell me what happened? I talked to my mom about it. She said something about a fire?”

“You were swallowed up in a fire, Naleen. You were screaming on the ground and Kaidus came to you. He was shouting something, and then he stepped away right before a fire rose up around you.” Sylvia replied, taking a seat on the bed.

“Hm… fire…. Why fire?” She was confused.

“Larant said fire is the simplest element to control. Something about bodies producing heat? He was explaining a lot of things, but I can’t remember.” Sylvia answered.

“Don’t worry about it too much, Naleen. Larant’s awakening was a fiery hare that burnt his room. At least yours wasn’t something so stupid, and you didn’t burn anything except a small part of the stage.” Jillian grinned.

“Really? Hehehe!” Naleen giggled, hearing the absurdity of it.


Kaidus was relaxing by the window with a book. Beside him, Anise quietly sat, reading one of her own.

The Arms competition had ended three days ago.
The final match was against a spear master named Sullivan from western Darsus. The man was great at long distance fighting, but once he got inside the spear’s attack range, he was able to easily take the man down.

Winning the competition, he was given a pouch containing four luminous Rae worth 2000erns, and a custom champion’s token as proof of victory.
It was quite a big difference from the runner up’s prize of 400erns.

*knock* *knock* *knock* someone was at the door.

“Ha…” He sighed, getting up to answer it.

“Is this the Paltos house?” A man wearing expensive looking clothes inquired. Behind the man was an extravagant carriage.

“It is.” Kaidus replied.

“Does a Kaidus Paltos live here?”

“He does.”

“Here. A letter from Lord Aliser of the 12th ward, directed to one Kaidus Paltos. Please make sure to give it to him.” The man handed him a sealed letter before promptly getting back into the carriage and riding off.

Another one…
Closing the door, he opened the folded letter and read through the contents.
It was the same thing he’d been receiving for the past two days: a letter from some lord asking for him to visit, and a promise of employment with lavish gifts and such.
With a thought, the letter went up in flames.


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48 Responses to Chapter 4 – Awakening

  1. Thanks for the chapter!

  2. Lol the man doesn’t even recognize the champion.
    Hopefully Vion will get over himself, but if he doesn’t…..MORE CONFLICT!!!😆
    Thanks for the chapter!!

  3. FuZzYLoGiC says:

    Thank You for the chapter.. been waiting for the update.. (^0^)/
    Don’t worry being a little late, we’re understand Author have a Life too.. Keep it to your own pace..

  4. agila0212 says:

    I hope we can see a powerful villain soon (not powerful as Kaidus though).

    Thanks for the chapter.

    • akishu20 says:

      Dont think the “great” villain is coming anytime soon. Hasen did speak about a “entity” whos like a sworn enemy to Kaidus i guess ? Tought maybe some mid-level villains will show up xD

  5. TLODAN says:

    Thanks for the chapter.

  6. chibi says:

    What about his familiars? Did they escape to their master’s embrace or are they still locked somewhere?
    Looking forward the next chapter!

    • Za1d3 says:

      That is the big question. 😀

      • Khress says:

        loved the chapter.

        the familiars: 2 are with him
        one is still trapped in a magic box, but getting stronger with every attempt from kaidus
        the fourth one was not mentioned at this point

        • Kortodo says:

          “the fourth one was not mentioned at this point”

          What about the brief mention of a talking sword, in one of the books/stories Kaidus read, that was asking to be returned to its master? Unless I’m remembering wrong.

  7. OP MC is OP. thanks for the chapter

  8. TheFrostDude says:

    Thanks for the new chapter!

  9. ShieldBasher says:

    Pssh silly lords …

  10. akishu20 says:

    Thanks a lot for the Chapter 🙂

  11. The_Truth says:

    Hahaha😂, Naleen I feel sorry for you… I can actually imagine your stupidity increasing!

    Oh I don’t mean education-wise since I know she’ll work hard, I meant her egoism increasing. Once she discovers that she still can’t beat Kaidus in terms of swordsmanship AND magic, her pompous arrogant self will not take too kindly to the evident truth. Remember Prim: The Emerald Princess? She didn’t take too kindly to defeat, tried to get revenge but was quickly subdued due to friends being out-of-this-world scared of Kaidus.

    Now imagine a more hot-headed, self-righteous, stubborn, hard-to-reason-with, barbarian of a princess [Naleen] than beautiful (in the words of Kaidus *wink* *wink*) and understanding but also headstrong princess [Prim], going against Kaidus… I hope to the highest heavens(Za1d3) that Kaidus’s feelings of neutrality towards Naleen will turn to disgust!

    Oh! And what does that mean “…It just means that there’s nothing to be ashamed of in losing to him” and then the follow up “…remembering how dominant the boy was during their fight.”–> we can already deduce that if she didn’t awakened to her powers, and she lost to Kaidus, her conciousness would never take it as a result and her thoughts would either go to two directions; either she will persevere and have hope to defeat Kaidus in the future, or that she doesn’t see the expected result of her hard work and denies that she lost, have a grudge towards Kaidus and ruins herself in the process…like Vion.

    But this is the alternative, and unfortunately Naleen was lucky enough to be given mercy by the author that she was saved from self-destruction(too bad).

    However, since the main route is that she awakened, and then we mixed-in the two sentences mentioned in my prior paragraph; we know that Naleen will have a bigger head than before, and it seems that her denial is already present on the thin surface of her skin.

    If and when(I hope) the time comes that Naleen has fallen, I wonder how far she’ll fall?

    • Schion says:

      this goes to show she is just like her brother with the only difference being that we get to see how Vion might’ve been like if he had awakened to magic where as Vion is the example of what she would be like if she hadn’t awakened to magic XD

      • I dont exactly disagree but Naleen still has potential to mature.
        And her arrogance is prolly nonexistent now. She admitted she wasnt Kai match, right?
        A true bitch wouldn’t, they would simply make excuses for their loss.
        See? A faint kernel of potential at least.

  12. Nex Serus says:

    An Op Mc is the best! And now officially plus 1 harem 🙂 Liliana don’t worry you’re coming up next xD thanks for this btw

  13. Thanks for the chapter.

  14. Tracktor says:


  15. optionnal says:

    will kaidus visit the academy hmm… it would be great if they all meet up again. thanks for the update..

  16. Nakiami says:

    Thank you for the chapter! It made my day.

  17. Dauntes says:

    YESSSSS, so happy I decided to check your site! Thanks so much for the new chapter. Constantly looking forward to your updates. Have a good one! 😀

  18. Schion says:

    I feel like the main reason Naleen isn’t feeling frustrated by her loss is because she might be subconsciously thinking “If I can’t beat him in sword skills then I will try and surpass him in magic” =w=

    • Khress says:

      no. she isn’t. her brother has not awoken (yet). she comes from a family of magic knights. she was happy that her talent has finally awoken. and now she did not simply lose to him. her power manifested and she fell unconscious. thats a pretty good excuse for a loss. she knows that he is an extremly strong mage. alone the ice flower on her desk is proof of that.

  19. allecrastia says:

    Why do I get the feeling Kaidus will be a fire magic teacher for Naleen hmmmm….

  20. Can’t wait for the next chapter… Really great story. I have read this atleast 10 times since last Wednesday – when I started reading this…
    Btw – by the B2 prologue.. it seems like Kaidus would save this prince and maybe become his night or adviser or be backed by him as “special” appointee…
    Also I think in a short term.. Kaidus maybe mingling with the old cast from Zorin Academy and Ravon House… Like match ups and stuffs…
    Oh by the way do you think Kaidus became a chair at the mercenary guild? He did land a hit on the ‘Captain’ when we first went to join with his is mis-understanding/conceit on not using magic to defeat the guy…

    • Khress says:

      don’t count on Kaidus becoming an adviser. Kaidus loaths all things related to kings and high lords.
      his aim for the forseeable future is finding his summons and learning what happened in the past. that means traveling around the world.

      • Ascherit says:

        I shall read on and find out.
        I’m also expecting another challenge to bring out more of his past, so that we can flesh out more pieces such as when he first took his father’s sword.

  21. d3san says:

    cmon, gib chaptuh bruh

  22. Bipook says:

    Thank you for the chapter

  23. shadyxlr says:

    Come on I hope to god he gets a harem it seems like it would work with the girls at least also a little sick of a one girl ending since they literally do that in every book almost…

  24. Kuro says:

    Thx for the chapter))

  25. Ascherit says:

    Enjoyable chapter!
    Predictable Lords, muhahahaha

  26. Ascherit says:

    Reblogged this on ascherit and commented:
    Good chapter

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